miércoles, 21 de mayo de 2008

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY


BOGOTA

Bogota has a people that arrive from other countries from different facts: violence, search of work, improve life quality, but when then arrive to this city find that the oportunities aren't how the think, for this reason we see poor people in our city, adittional to the people that were born in Bogota the people that don't have money, search this, ask in the street.

first of all, many people move with this situation, for this, when any person asks begs for money, and you can evidence her/his need with only you see, you will give money to them.

in adittion, you find people that search the money with other kind of work, for example in the street or in the transport you find people that sell some products, they work in this way, and the other people help them buy their products, it is better that they work i8n informal job, in this form doesn't increase the insecurity in our city.

on the other hand,w3e believe that the solution is to give then (poor people in the street) money, but isn't the really way to end to this problem, if we do a reflection about the ministro opinion we find that with this situatiob our city wont development, and every day poverty increase.

in conclusion, bogota's inhabitants don't create road to find the solution, some people don't give money to help poor people, but don't help to search a way to end thjis problem, is for this that every one should think, do a reflection and create a easy solution that step for step end for finish with this problem.

written by: carolina bustos

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